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About Me
- Keerth
- Singapore
- As you can see, my name is pretty long so most people call me Keerth. I am a year 3 Electrical Engineering student. For a long time I have been wanting to start a Blog, but have been rather lazy. So when NUS offered a module where Blogging was in the syllabus I grabbed the opportunity the minute I got to know of the module.
Hi Keerth,
ReplyDeleteJust an awkward sentence I have found, "I have a great interest in being part of the Credit Suisse family and contribute significantly to its continued success. "
Should it be "... and contributing ... " since you are still having an "interest" in the same line?
The application letter is good as you have identified all your skills and also some of your personality.
Lastly, since you asked them to contact you, it will be slightly weird to tell them you will be contacting them. Perhaps remove the part telling them to contact you, and put in you will be emailing / calling them instead.
With regards,
Pak Ming
Hi Pak,
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment. I feel that saying 'contribute significantly...' is fine, but it is not wrong to write it the way you have mentioned. I will check it later :)
Cheers,
Keerth